MJ写的恐怖小说草稿（谁有空翻译下？）

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Horror Story written by Michael Jackson

Michael Jackson wrote this story titled "Kids on Swings". It was penned by Michael Jackson when he visited the UK in 2006. It was written in black and blue pens on the back of letters and pictures of an Irish Georgian Castle...

Written as play, it tells how Paris and Prince are playing on swings until the boy becomes disinterested and runs off.

"A pack of wild dogs then chase the two as Paris screams for her Dad."

The two kids spot a man working in a field with a sling blade "We see him working but we can't see his face."

The character of Prince tells his sister "He murdered his wife and no one ever sees his kids cause he keeps them tied to the bed like his wife, before he murdered her. He starves them first then he murdered them, Paris."

His terrified sister admits to being scared before asking how he killed them. "He did it with a sling blade Paris."

In the next scene Prince and Paris are in bed - too frightened to sleep. A twisted passage then describes how the monster got a facial scar.

"He starved a man for 2 weeks," it reads. "Just before killing him they had a fight. The guy he was trying to kill grabbed the knife to attack him. And he cut him over the eyes.

"He then got scared and ran into what they call the endless BLACK FOREST . . . he was never found again. Because they say there is no way out of the endless Black Forest."

The two youngsters venture into the 'Black Forest' to visit the 'crazy man.'

Shaking with fear, the children peer through the window of his cottage before a spine-tingling scene in which he creeps up behind them.

He stabs them as they try to escape his clutches and Prince has an asthma attack and stops breathing.

The monster then hunts them down in the forest before Prince apparently dies with his sister's head on his 'lifeless chest.'

In the final twist, the man carries Prince back to the cottage and holds hands with Paris. She is described as feeling 'safe and loved by him.'

The man carries Prince to his bed and puts the cover over the sick boy before sitting in a chair and watching him. When her brother finally awakes from his coma, Paris calms the traumatized boy as she tells him the man "won't hurt you".

Closing lines read: "He pulls the Toys from his jacket. What was broken is now mended, Fixed Paris. He didn't steal our toys Prince he fixed them. KIDS are happy to see their fixed toys again.

"Man gets up, walks to the door right before he exits Prince says thank you they exchange smiles and we see him."

credits: michaelious


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o2maple

这是传说中用来“吓孩子”的草稿么0.0

Jasmine-love-MJ

第一次翻译东西，凑合着看吧。

迈克尔杰克逊写的恐怖小说

迈克尔杰克逊写的这个故事名叫做“秋千上的孩子”。2006年他逗留在英国时，用黑蓝笔把它写在一些信和图片的背面，这些图片上画着一座爱尔兰乔治亚式的城堡。

这个故事，以剧本的形式，描述了Prince和Paris一起玩荡秋千的场景，直到Prince失去兴致并跑开了。

“一群野狗尾随着他们，Paris大声尖叫着爸爸。”

两个孩子看见一个男人带着弹簧刀在田野里干活：“我们可以看到他在干活儿，但是看不到他的脸。”

Prince这个角色告诉他的妹妹“这个男人谋杀了他的妻子，而且从来没人看见过他的孩子，因为他把他们都绑在床上，像之前要杀害他的妻子那样对待他们。Paris，他要把他们先饿上几天再杀死。”

在还没有问这个男人是如何杀死他们之前，他受到惊吓的妹妹就承认她害怕了。“他是用一把弹簧刀干的。”

在下一场景中，Prince和Paris躺在床上，因为太害怕而睡不着。这张皱巴巴的纸上描写了这个怪人脸上的疤是如何而来的。

“他先是把这个男人饿上两周，”纸上面写道。“在杀死他之前，他们打了一架。这个他试图想要杀死的男人抓起刀冲向他，并划过他的眼睛。”

“他的脸上因此留下了疤痕，所以他躲进一片无边无际的，人们称为‘黑暗森林’的地方。从此以后，他再也没有出现过。因为人们都说一进入黑森林就无路可出。”

“这两个小孩冒险进入‘黑暗森林’去寻找这个‘疯人’。”

孩子们害怕得直发抖，他们透过窗户偷偷往小屋里面窥视。正在此时，令人毛骨悚然的一幕出现了，这个男人从他们身后出现了。

孩子们试图逃离他的魔爪，却被他牢牢抓住。这时，Prince的哮喘病发，呼吸困难。

怪人在森林里把他们俩抓住时，Prince显然快死了，他妹妹把头埋在他毫无生机的胸膛上。

最后，这个男人牵着Paris的手，把Prince带到他的小屋。Paris表示她感受到关怀和安全。

这个男人把Prince放在他的床上，并用床单轻轻盖在这个生病的男孩身上。然后，他坐在椅子上照看着他。当她的哥哥从昏迷中醒来时，Paris使这个惶恐的男孩平静下来，并告诉他这个男人“不会伤害你”。

最后一段写着：他从夹克里取出玩具，原本破损的地方已经被修复完好。“Prince，看，他没有偷我们的玩具，你看，他修好了它。”孩子们非常开心地发现他们的玩具被修好了。

“男人站起身来，在Prince刚要把‘谢谢’说出口时走出了门外。孩子们看着他相视一笑。”

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scarecrow

keen这个是mj自己写的吗？？

CoffeeYuan

What...？很好奇，坐等翻译

Myfavorite

嗯，等高手翻译。Michael,Miss You！

期盼

期待高手翻译。。。。。。。。。。。。

Myfavorite

回复 3# Jasmine-love-MJ
    既然看得懂，何不给我们翻译一下喽！

新起点

Horror Story written by Michael Jackson
由迈克尔写的恐怖故事
Michael Jackson wrote this story titled "Kids on Swings". It was penned by Michael Jackson when he visited the UK in 2006. It was written in black and blue pens on the back of letters and pictures of an Irish Georgian Castle...
迈克尔杰克逊写的故事标题是“秋千上的孩子”是由MJ亲自执笔在他06年访问联合王国的时候。用黑色和蓝色钢笔写回信上附着爱尔兰格鲁吉亚城堡的照片。

Jasmine-love-MJ

回复  Jasmine-love-MJ
    既然看得懂，何不给我们翻译一下喽！
Myfavorite 发表于 2010-5-29 03:26

其实我正在翻。。不过是第一次翻译东西。。而且大半夜的。。囧。。再等等吧。。
我速度很慢的。。

新起点

Written as play, it tells how Paris and Prince are playing on swings until the boy becomes disinterested and runs off.
写的同时，讲述着王子和巴黎是如何玩荡秋千的，直到他变得有点自私起来。
   恩，我只是试着翻译，  此文  仅供参考！！！   等待真正的高手，然后看看我的翻译是多么的雷人！！！

新起点

"A pack of wild dogs then chase the two as Paris screams for her Dad
一群疯狂的小狗追逐着他们两个同时巴黎向爸爸尖叫着！
The two kids spot a man working in a field with a sling blade "We see him working but we can't see his face."
这两个孩子指着一个在田野工作带着吊索刀片的男人，我们可以看见他在工作却看不见他的脸。

新起点

The character of Prince tells his sister "He murdered his wife and no one ever sees his kids cause he keeps them tied to the bed like his wife, before he murdered her. He starves them first then he murdered them, Paris."
  依王子的性格他会告诉妹妹“他谋杀了他的妻子而且没有人见过他的孩子 ，因为他把孩子和他妈妈一样绑在床上，在谋杀她之前，他不给他们吃东西饿着他们之后就杀害了他们，巴黎。

新起点

His terrified sister admits to being scared before asking how he killed them. "He did it with a sling blade Paris."
他的语言让妹妹开始感到很害怕 然后问是怎么杀了他们的，是用的吊索刀片的，巴黎。
In the next scene Prince and Paris are in bed - too frightened to sleep. A twisted passage then describes how the monster got a facial scar.
之后巴黎和王子在床上太害怕而不敢睡觉了。扭曲的描述怪物脸上是怎么会有疤痕的。

新起点

"He starved a man for 2 weeks," it reads. "Just before killing him they had a fight. The guy he was trying to kill grabbed the knife to attack him. And he cut him over the eyes.
他饿了一个人两个星期，在杀他之前他们搏斗过，这人试图捉住他并用小刀袭击他，最后被他刺伤了眼睛。
"He then got scared and ran into what they call the endless BLACK FOREST . . . he was never found again. Because they say there is no way out of the endless Black Forest."
他感到害怕就跑进了人们称漫无边际的黑暗森林，从此没有了踪影，乃是因为传说进了黑暗森林就没有路出来。