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发表于 2006-4-7 23:29:45 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Once day, when I opened my eyes, your eyes with deep and charming come into my sight. What mystic beauty eyes! They seem that they could see through the world How beautiful smile you have! It warms my heart and give me best ever power. What matchless sound! It seems the clarity of the spring water provides moisture for every life in the world and shocks the soul of the whole world. Your dancing, how can I put any word on it? All things come from God! Your heart is like ocean with pure and sincere, you just give and give never ask People said you are stranger, don't care about what they said they're just tiny human Be Yourself If you were Peter Pan, and I were Wendy we could fly the beautiful starry night with breeze we could sing on the top of the tree we could fight with pirates together we can change the world and make it a better place Wendy left Peter Pan finally but I will never leave you alone I wish I could be your shadow, wherever you go follow you and listen to your words, your music and your tired and weeping heart quietly Whatever how you look whatever what people said in the promise, I'll always love you from my heart You said,"you're alone, like stranger in Moscow", I will say,"you are not alone, I'll be there for you and care enough to bear you" Your happiness is my biggest wish. I can't stop singing with you I can't stop dancing with you My heart can't stop beating because you Weep tears only for your joy and your sorrow God, I can not breathe! Loving you without reason you are worth I devote all, even my life If you were born for music and I exist only for you God, I just can't stop loving you! What more can I say! Your smile is my power Your sound shocks my spirit You are my soul You rock my world You are my life! I'll pray for you in my whole life God bless you! 不知可不可以算作散文诗,英文不是很好,正在努力学习,请多包涵:)
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发表于 2006-4-7 23:36:04 | 显示全部楼层
支持支持,楼主继续努力!
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楼主态度很端正 不过以我2把刀的english水平也看出了不下5处的语法错误 希望继续努力!!

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 楼主| 发表于 2006-4-8 00:09:14 | 显示全部楼层
太感动了,一定继续努力,为MJ 而奋斗

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 楼主| 发表于 2006-4-8 00:27:27 | 显示全部楼层
哪位高手 能帮忙改改吗

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翻译 看不明白

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大致看懂了 写的不错~

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不错不错,楼主继续努力呀!
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发表于 2006-4-9 18:38:33 | 显示全部楼层
好玩耶.........爱迈迈的歌迷里,也有也有诗人耶......你说一个细腻敏感的诗人爱上一位天使般的伟大天王时,会碰出什么样的火花呢....他的灵感怕是要淹没地球了........好玩!!!!! :clap:clap:clap 人家说,恋爱中的男人和女人,他们的言语唯美而且浪漫...哇......我跟迈迈恋爱.......我也要变成诗人咯~~~~~鼓掌!!!! HOHOHOHO
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