Just For You

紫菀 · 发表于 2008-2-13 20:34:58

Just For You ''M"is for the wonderful music you give me. "I"means you are so important in my heart. "C"means you are like a constellation with prefect stillness. "H"means that I hope you could hear my voice from such a distance. "A"is for your amazing tallent. "E"is for your eyes,with love shining. "L"is for your loneliness ,and I will try my best to comfort it. "J"is for your joyless childhood,but don't worry,I'll love your more. Another''A"means that you are always No.1. Another"C"is for your contribution to the art world. "K"means that kids will always love you as you love them. "S"is for the scenery in your magical world. "O"means that only you can touch my heart. "N"means nothing is more important than loving you and learning from you. Put these letters together ,they spell "MICHAEL.JACKSON". Two words mean the whole world to me...

[ 本帖最后由紫菀于 2008-2-14 14:33 编辑 ]

ducky · 发表于 2008-2-13 21:10:50

You are so creative! I love this one!

liberaingirl · 发表于 2008-2-13 21:13:30

Oh,How clever you are 紫菀 Your feelings are similar to mine. And it is getting much clear that I've ever known. At least,I know what should i do. What can i give to you...Yes it's true to life But don't let it be coming over.There's no more chance. So come on. This way. You've always known how to touch me. The touch of sunshine. And I've always been in love with you. I love you Michael. Happy Birthday Prince.....I love you too..

MJgalaxy · 发表于 2008-2-13 21:15:50

有才呀！原来是个藏头诗！

ordine · 发表于 2008-2-13 21:54:48

A poem with love & creativity ! But there are some small mistakes : (1)love shining "should be "love shine" (2)" love you the way you love them" should be "love you as the way you love them" (3)"Two words mean the world to me...change into"Tow words meant the whole world to me"will be better ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us , you're a nice and creative girl ~ (My English is not so good . If somone finds any mistakes that I've made,please help me to fix them up . Thank you ! )

紫菀 · 发表于 2008-2-13 22:29:56

Well,thank you so much for pointing out my mistakes. But I have confidence in myself. (1)In fact, I don't know why,but this is first used by Howard.Johnson. (2)...:gongxi (3)It's forever.I don't need to use Past Tense. Thank you so much.I'm very happy that you like my poem.

ordine · 发表于 2008-2-14 00:43:45

"love shining "means 　“闪着光的爱”in Chinese, "love shine"means　“爱的光芒” in Chinese... I'm so sorry that I misunderstood your meaning in this sentense~

hollyhxjlovesmj · 发表于 2008-2-14 11:43:53

Put these words together ,they spell "MICHAEL.JACKSON". "words" should be " letters". The last sentence you wrote: Two words mean the whole world to me. You have mixed up "word" and "letter". Put your whole poem in the middle and it will look nicer.

紫菀 · 发表于 2008-2-14 14:23:03

Thank you so much. I'm too careless,I'll fix it up.

ordine · 发表于 2008-2-14 14:51:29

WOW ! It looks more lovely now !!Michael must be very pleased if he see this poem ! I guess I should put this into my collection ~ Thanks紫菀!

ljswg522552 · 发表于 2008-3-5 00:54:23

I've read all the replys carefully. Now It is MJ's that flowing into my ears. The word "constellation " has puzzled me ,hehe,and ,ah-ha,to put out our ideas in English takes effect in both the enhance of our language level and a better capablity to appreciate and understand Machael. A suggestion I'd like to give is that the title and the poem will be one if replace the title with "Just For You ----to Machael Jackson".

sailongyue · 发表于 2008-5-25 19:49:50

just found out one mistake "talent",but not "tallent"

babiwawarainbow · 发表于 2010-1-11 18:56:13

by yourself?????????

rhythm · 发表于 2010-1-11 21:44:58

He is as great an artist as ever lived!

aliceleng · 发表于 2010-1-12 03:17:11

Composed by yourself? What a great article!

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