大家看看我写的信。给点建议看需要改改什么！(把你们的也发来看看)

CHENBEI2

亲爱的先生：
你好。我叫陈贝蓓我来自中国。
我是迈克尔的忠实粉丝。
我在这里向您请求为迈克尔得到应有的公正。
希望你们能为莫里戴上手铐。把他送进监狱。
给我们歌迷和迈克尔的家人一个合情合理的说法。
还迈克尔一个公道。
　
我们同住在一个世界的屋檐下。
我们都是上帝的孩子。
先生。请你们看看吧.在失去迈克尔之后他的家人多么的难过。
他的三个孩子从此变成了孤儿,我们歌迷的心在滴血。
或许你并不会在乎这一些。
但是先生。做为警察。你的职责不就是伸张争议惩恶除奸吗。
好吧。先生,我就只能说这么多。
　　
上帝保佑你们。
谢谢。

　
Dear Sir:
Hello. My name　is Ch'en Beibei。
I come from China.
I'm Michael's loyal fans.
I am here to your request for the Michael deserves justice.
I hope you can Moree handcuffed. Put him in prison.
To our fans and Michael's family a reasonable argument.
Michael is also need　a fair referee.

We live in a world under the eaves.
We are all God's children.
sir, Invite you to take a look at it,
Michael　after losing his family how sorry.
Since then, his three children became orphans,
and the bleeding hearts of our fans.
Perhaps you do not care about that some.
However, sir, As the police. Of your duties is to uphold the dispute does not punish evil and eliminating traitors do.
Okay. President, I only say.

God bless you.
thanks.

CHENBEI2

我写得比较简短.主要是我知道他们可能不会看,
所以写得再多也无用,
我就是为了让他们知道,MJ的力量!MJ歌迷的力量!!
全世界都在关注着!!!
　
一切为了爱,迈会保佑我们的.

MJ、就是这样

楼主我顶你！！！！！

梓楠

As the whole world know that Dr.Murray is the murderer ,who killed
Michael Joseph Jackson .

Now also the whold world are watching ,what's the United States 's law
will do to this murderer. American Law is fair or not.

Please do not disappoint all of us. Murray should be judged ,because
HE IS GUILTY!!!

我是这么写的 当然前面还说了自己是来自中国的MJ FANS

weiwei8787

LZ写的不错，我也写的很短，主要还是英语太烂了而且我认为写的多了他们也不一定会看，能多发一封就发一封，让他们知道全世界都在关注此事的进展，凶手就应该受到应有的惩罚，We need truth。
PS：我的邮件MS没发出去，发送状态：邮件发送中。。

LittleSusie

挺LZ。。。

MJ_love

挺好的啊。又简短。
我今天发了8封。全是中文的哈哈。
我猜他不会一份一份打开看吧

CHENBEI2

回复 7# MJ_love


    牛啊。他们绝对看不懂。

MJ_love

回复  MJ_love


    牛啊。他们绝对看不懂。
CHENBEI2 发表于 2010-2-8 15:25

    不过我第一次发给他们是用英文的。
public procurator,I believe you are equitable.
I hope you can correct to try that case about michael jackosn and Dr.Conrad Murray!!
We love michael and hope to get a justice court decision.
Thank you.

yanmilin

已经很好了的说。

sharejoy0807

建议楼主将I可否改为we,将迈迷一族加入进去？

迈迈的长手指

不错，挺LZ，我们继续发邮件吧

不爱到爱

枪手帮我写的，HIAHIA~

Dear Sir/Madam,
I write to concern about the prosecution of Dr. Conrad Murray. I am a common fan of Mr. Michael Jackson, and I give top priority to the closest of Michael Jackson’ homicide. However, what happened recently makes me sick; I even think I am gonging through a drama, of which Murray was the leading performer.
Today I want talk about the real proof about Michael Jackson’s autopsy not Murray’s surrender. We believe the autopsy is indisputably authoritative and representative. It is clear from the autopsy that an excess anesthetic and other sedatives, which injected by Dr. Conrad Murray, made Michael Jackson die. What’s more, Murray is a certificated doctor, if he told you I have no idea about what he had done to patient (Michael Jackson) will make him die, do you think it’s so funny? But accursedly Murray not only kills Michael Jackson his family, make his babies become orphan.
I hope to arrest and prosecute Conrad Murray, Who killed Michael. Even if what Murray has done, I also believe the justice of the American legal system, because Michael Jackson is innocent at last in 2005. I trust and have faith that your office will use every legal weapon in your arsenal to ensure that Conrad Murray is prosecuted to the full extent of the law and be prosecuted for all of the laws he has violated resulting in the death of Michael Jackson.
Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Inggie Lee

迈迷sofei

我今天和昨天也发了。。

我希望他们会看。。。

迷雾依人

英文太烂的人今天杯具了，唉，只能精神支持了