To my love MJ

Michael的孩子

Dear Michael,
Do you miss us?
Although it has been 5 years since you have gone, we still can't accept the fact. We miss you everyday.
Though it has been 5 years, I still listen to your songs, read your informations and say ‘Michael, I love you' everyday.
I have recognized a lot of fans through the Internet because of you. All of them are very kind-hearted, and loving you with enthusiasm. I feel so glad to make friends with them. I believe that your love will keep us together forever.
You are not only an artist, but also our brother, our teacher, our father and our Jesus. I wish you can still dance and sing in the heaven. Thank you for bringing us so much love!
We will continue to inherite your spirit and your love—to help the world!
Michael, I love you, I miss you, from the bottom of my heart. Love you forever! We are the world!

Yours sincerely,
Candy

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希望与爱成就着情感世界里的真诚，每一个爱着michael的人都会懂得，信仰在生命里的珍贵，这是一份冥冥中早已注定的情节，无论时光让相遇带来了还是带走了，心里的那份对michael的挚爱从未改变过，也许来世我们会和michael成为身边的朋友，或是真的在一起了那又会怎样呢，生命里的时间如果不去好好的珍惜如同被荒废一样，有些事注定了悲欢同在，就像是对待朋友的心一样，快乐与你分享是我心中的祝福，困难与你分担是我的选择，我们是幸运的，因为michael因为不舍才聚集到这里，一同话哀思道祈福，生命里的时间不是无限的，我们对michael的执着是无悔的，众神带走了michael，只为世人懂得何为可贵，留下了我们只为歌颂信仰的真谛~~

JovineJackson

Well written! {:soso_e179:}

Michael的孩子

JovineJackson 发表于 2015-1-8 22:21
Well written!

Thanks！{:soso_e176:}

weiwei8787

写的真好，老迈看了一定会感动的。

王者风范

写的很感人，但有几处好像不妥，1.information是不可数名词吧 2.Although it has been 5 years since you have gone。since 后应是一般过去式吧。 3.I wish you can still dance and sing in the heaven.  wish后是虚拟语气，应用could吧。以上是个人拙见，仅供参考，谢谢。

王者风范

还有一处inherit 的拼写，多了一个e

Michael的孩子

王者风范 发表于 2015-1-9 17:37
写的很感人，但有几处好像不妥，1.information是不可数名词吧 2.Although it has been 5 years since you h ...

嗯嗯，是哦！毕业太久了，很多小细节没以前那么严谨了。谢谢提醒。{:soso_e121:}

Michael的孩子

weiwei8787 发表于 2015-1-9 13:43
写的真好，老迈看了一定会感动的。

希望他看到{:soso_e109:}

你是MJ的好孩子~ {:soso_e100:}

Michael的孩子

迈之爱 发表于 2015-1-9 20:08
你是MJ的好孩子~

{:soso_e176:} {:soso_e178:} {:soso_e176:}