This year , say thank you ...

ordine

When night comes As we stand on a star Sun lights hide Hidden in the glimpse of joy Sadness had fallen Fallen into those loniest souls Hardness won't end Never stops contacting the weakness of an eye When we have lost so many Realizing those greatful givens in life is needed The inspiration that had givien, leads all the hopes & desire With nothing to say Silence dapped across the tears None might ever understand this But one One innocent dear friend lies in the bottom of a heart forever On the time of the Christmas eve Try to forgive everything that held up the pain Try to remember all the love you recived Let us pack up all those lovely words Just simply saying two: "thank you" Thanks to the people who loves us , needs us ,hurts us Or had helped us & gave us each warm hug inside ... I'm not a person with brilliant words But I'd truely want to say "thank you" Thanks to Michael ---- the one who has helped me by sharing his life ! [ 本帖最后由 ordine 于 2007-12-25 14:09 编辑 ]

yourfan

Thanks to Michael ---- the one who have helped me by sharing his life

winniejessie

Touching poem Thank you,Michael. I'm a better one because of you.

hollyhxjlovesmj

Good passion in poem but have some mistakes. 1)"standing"should be"stand" 2)"glimps"should be "glimpse" 3)"soul"should be"souls" 4)"christmas"should be"Christmas" 5"helds "should be "held" 6)"recived"should be "received" 7)"Thanks to the people who loves us , needs us ,hurts us Or had helped us & gave us each warmy hugs inside ..." should be "Thanks to the people who love us,need us,hurt us Or had helped us and given us each warm hug inside ..." 8)"have"should be"has"

ordine

谢谢四楼的朋友耐心的一一的纠正我的错误，在英语方面我还有如此多的欠缺！我会一直努力！Thank you so much ！！！

liberaingirl

Thank you Michael Because of you, I wanna learn English well now. I'll keep holding on, and never give up. 谢谢楼下几位了，谢谢，谢谢。哈哈。 这种错误我犯的不是一两次了，写道卷面上，要减去0.5分。 [ 本帖最后由 liberaingirl 于 2008-2-10 07:24 编辑 ]

winniejessie

呵呵 楼上： because [ 本帖最后由 winniejessie 于 2007-12-26 12:40 编辑 ]

hollyhxjlovesmj

原帖由 liberaingirl 于 2007-12-25 20:57 发表 Thank you Michael Becouse of you, I wanna learn English well now. I'll keep holding on, and never give up. 我不知道写得对不对，那位好心人能帮我检查一下？

"Becouse" should be "Because" You have expressed the meaning well.

Cheri.MJ

Yeah~ I agree with you. Michael.Beacause of you,i learn what is the real life we live now. Beacause of you,I know we must take more care of human-being. Beacause of you,I met many friends ,they all love you~ Beacause of you.I started studying English by heart. Beacause of you.I started knowing this world.

ljswg522552

To communicate with companying friends ----fans of MJ ----is a good habit ,and also a effective way to learn English. Machael is a angel whoes wings beong his touching songs.

sailongyue

a excellent one! actually,i wanna sdd some rhythm and music to this ...poem, have a try?