(已修改)英文原创——Mixed feelings on Thriller 25th Anniversary

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Mixed feelings on Thriller 25th Anniversary

Twenty-five years ago, Thriller rocked the world. It beat the Guiness Biggest Selling Record. It has been the world’s biggest selling album of all time and the record keeper belongs to Michael Jackson. With this fabulous as well as unimaginable music album came out, he soon became the most prestigious artist at that age and reach an unbreakable accomplishment. His personable appearance, incredible musical talent, unequaled dance moves and groundbreaking creativity has entertained people for over four decades. He is the very one that shines in the world. A great number of people grew along with his music, meanwhile Michael was changing and getting mature. Now, twenty-five years later, he published Thriller 25th Anniversary, to mommemorate his commenorable album. By making new remixes with his friends, he lets all the people know that he is still and he can even make great smash hits although time has elepased. The legend continues. The Girl Is Mine 2008 version sounds a little different from the original one. Michael duet with Will.i.am and Will.i.am did the rap part. It seems not so attractive to me but a little brisk than before. I don’t wanna make comments on his new remixes that long, cause each has its own merits. I still remember when I first heard that Will.i.am was sure to be his co-worker to help him make the Thriller 25th Anniversary remix and his new album as well. I felt surprised for the ages between two of them and I even felt a little worried if the opinions on music between them would have divergences. As the news said they enjoyed working together a lot then I came to realization my worries were needless. Through being co-worker with Michael Jackson, Will.i.am got crazy about him with each passing day. The work was over with a pleasant substantial victory. This new remix is popular among fans. Billie Jean 2008 remix sounds a little like an another unofficial remix made in early times. Anyway, I love it a great deal. It’s an essential. What’s more, it’s one of my favorites. I could never make a comment on a remix not even associate it with the original version. Making comparisons with himself inspires Michael to make greater efforts and notable achievements along his way. It’s necessary for a man’s success. Well, in a word, this new Billie Jean completed by he himself and Kanye West is terrific in my view. It makes the album more perfect. Sincerely hope it’ll be a smash hit once again. Other remixes in Thriller 25th Anniversary don’t leave such deep impressions to me. For the matter of that, it indicates that Michael Jackson is an eternal star. Good music appeals to everyone and so are stars. He is still of great attraction even though twenty-five years has passed. And Michael is the real king of pop. Said I love him but I lied. Last but not least, I would like to express my feeling there, he is the forever shining star on the stage, such a perfect and great man from the bottom of my heart. Here, I wanna give my heartfelt thanks to him. God bless him. Wish all the griefs of his life has gone forever and ever and tomorrow is another day. Truly,history is waiting to be made by him once again. Good luck to Michael Jackson and his children: Prince, Paris and Blanket.

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Mixed feelings on Thriller 25th Anniversary

Twenty-five years ago, Thriller rocked the world. It beat the Guiness Biggest Selling Record. It has been the world’s biggest selling album of all time and the record keeper belongs to Michael Jackson. With the debut of this fabulous as well as unimaginable music album, he soon became the most prestigious artist of his age to reach an unbreakable accomplishment. His personable appearance, incredible musical talent, unequaled dance moves and groundbreaking creativity has entertained people for over four decades. He is the very star that shines in the world. A great number of people grew along with his music, meanwhile Michael was changing and getting mature. Now, twenty-five years later, he published Thriller 25th Anniversary, to mommemorate his commenorable album. By making remixes with his friends, he shows the world that he is still able to make great smash hits although time has passed. The legend continues. The Girl is Mine 2008 version sounds a little different from the original one. It's a duet of Michael , with the rapping done by Will.i.am. It doesn’t seem so attractive to me but a little brisk than before. I don't wanna make comments on his new remixes that long, because each has its own merits. I still remember when I first heard that Will.i.am was sure to be his co-worker to help him make the Thriiler 25th Anniversary and his new album as well. I felt surprised because the age gap between the two of them and I even felt a little worried if they would have differing opinions on music. When the news said they enjoyed working together a lot then I found my worries relieved. Through co-working with Michael Jackson, Will.i.am got crazy about him with each passing day. Their work ended with a substantial victory. This new remix is popular among fans. Billie Jean 2008 remix sounds a little like an another unofficial remix made in early times. Anyway, I love it a great deal. It’s an essential part of this album. What’s more, it’s one of my favorites. I could never make a comment on a remix without associating it with the original version. Making comparisons with himself inspires Michael to make greater efforts and notable achievements along his way. It’s necessary for a man’s success. Well, in a word, this new Billie Jean completed by himself and Kanye West is terrific in my view. It makes the album more perfect. I sincerely hope it’ll be a smash hit once again. Other remixes in Thriller 25th Anniversary don't leave such deep impressions to me. For the matter of that,it indicates that Michael Jackson is an eternal star. Good music appeals to everyone and so are stars. He is still of great attraction even though twenty-five years have passed. And Michael is still the real king of pop. Said I love him but I lied. Last but not least, I would like to express my feeling there, he is the forever shining star on the stage,such a perfect and great man from the bottom of my heart. Here, I wanna give my heartfelt thanks to him. God bless him. I wish all the past griefs of his life will disperse forever and ever. After all, tomorrow is another day. Truly, history is waiting to be made by him once again. Good luck to Michael Jackson and his children: Prince, Paris and Blanket. You guys will always be bright stars in the night sky of entertainment.