Jason Jackson - See you in heaven(带个人翻译歌词)

rongrong7739 · 发表于 2010-1-28 14:44:54

我期待了好久！终于等到你了！我就知道会有英语高手听译出完整的歌词，你比我听译的强多了！非常非常感谢！另外，既然是切磋，有几个地方咱们再仔细推敲一下。
一、第二句for lonely one goon too soon我认为该是for those ones goon too soon
二、With child whose dream you makes come true 我认为更应该是With child who dreams  you make come true ；
三、That the world that could be peace and harmony 我觉得是in  the world that could be peace and harmon;
四：And whoever was found and whenever was gone to null，Said do you yet to come , let the world to turn(听不清)这两句不太准确，不过我听了好久也听不出来，咱们以后再研究。
五、You are the one been loved应为You are the one be loved
六、Try to find  the belief that the world that could love all people and soul 我听是Try to find  the belief that the world that could love all people begin sob,此处紧跟的And I know we'll see you in heaven 我听是but  I know we'll see you in heaven ;
七、In a planet we keen to loved is so bright (all you know)我听是in the past with the dream of love is so bright a dream;
八、So you can,Don’t be on the cry应为so declare,don't be on  the crowd(大声宣告，不要让真相隐藏在人群中）
九、And share the gift give for our heart我听是and  the shadow made before our heart（埋藏在我们心底的阴影）
十、最后的That the world been lighted，To satisfy your belief 我认为还是重复那段You are the one be loved，Said you have to leave

以上只是我个人的看法，有无不妥，还望多多指教。IT'S ALL FOR LOVE!

rongrong7739 · 发表于 2010-1-28 14:57:30

补充一下，我忘了BE的被动式是BE还是BEEN，所以那句You are the one been loved可能是对的哦。以下是我改过的全部歌词：
There's a place in our heart
For those ones goon too soon
So hard to believe
You'll be there too
A star shines so bringt
Your reality is no night
With child who dreams you make come true
You gave so much joy
You gave every  chance
From the music you give your song
You try the world to dance
You are the one be loved
Said you have to leave
With the song from your heart
You try to find belief
In the world that could be peace and harmony
And I know we'll see you in heaven
With your love you heal the world
You know the reality
Show the world to can
Now we leave the memory
We all must find the way
To think that charity
To make your dreamer of love come true
And whoever was found and whenever was gone to null
Said do you yet to come , let the world to turn(听不清)
You are the one be loved
Said you have to leave
With the song from your heart
Try to find  the belief in the world that could love all people begin sob
But I know we'll see you in heaven
In the past with the dream of love is so bright a dream
So declare
Don’t be on the crowd
So you smile
And the shadow made before our heart
Heaven shining bright now with you
You are the one been loved
Said you have to leave
With the song from your heart
Try to find belief
You are the one been loved
Said you have to leave
With the song from your heart
Try to find belief
Heal the world that could be peace and harmony
And I know we'll see you in heaven
Good bye ! Michael