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发表于 2010-2-1 14:52:25
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感谢楼主完整版的翻译,但有几处小毛病我列在下面吧
It is too short time with us, Michael dare
这句正确的应该是 In his too short time with us, ...
That we are the world. And then we'd better start taking care of it.
这句应是...that we are the world and that we'd better start taking BETTER care of it. 两个并列的宾语从句,that不可省略。
...our father love you so much, cause you are always there for him.
应该是 our father loved you so much, because you were always there for him. 两句王子说的都是过去式
...through all his hard work and dedication, his help to many charities and donated to all of them.
这句应该是Through all his hard work and dedication, he's helped many charities and donated to all of them. he‘s是he has缩写 |
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